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#02 IELTS Writing Task 2 "The number of over-weight children in developed countries is increasing"

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The number of over-weight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast-food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after there children's health.
To what extent do you agree with these views?

 There is plenty of evidence to suggest that children are over weight and the situation is getting worse, according to the medical reports. I fee that there are a number of reasons for this.
Some people blame the fact that we are surrounding by shops selling unhealthy, fatty foods such as chips and fried chicken,  at low prices. This has created a whole generation of adults who have never cooked a mean for themselves. If there were fewer of such restaurants, then children would not be attempted to buy take-away foods.
There is another argument that blames the parents for allowing there children to be over-weight. I tend to agree with view because good eating habits began early in life, long before children start to visit fast food outlets. If children are given chips and chocolate rather than nourishing food,  or are always allowed to choose what they want to eat, they will go for the sweat and salty foods every time and this will carry on throughout their lives.




There is a third factor, however, which contributes to this situation. Children these days take very little exercise. They do not walk to school. When they get home, they sit in front of television ot computers and play video games or watch cartoons. Not only this is an unhealthy pastime, it also gives them time to eat more junk food. What they need is to go outside and play active games and sports.
These two discussed views play a vital role in contributing to the problem, but I think we have to encourage young people to be more sound, as well as steering them away from fast food outlets and bad eating habits. We need to have a balanced approach.

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